Showing posts with label drafting. Show all posts
Showing posts with label drafting. Show all posts

Tuesday, 15 November 2011

On-line precedents: Help or hindrance?

The  internet has brought many benefits to lawyers and particularly to firms who wish to avoid (or cannot justify) the employment of a Knowledge Development Lawyer (aka a Professional Support Lawyer). Whereas previously in order to keep up with the latest legal developments one had to subscribe to countless hard copy journals; constantly receive updates from publishers; then spend time updating the loose leaf guides (often a job for the unsuspecting summer student) now this all happens on-line saving significant time (and paper for the more environmentally conscious of us). None of this is a bad thing and is of great benefit to large and small firm alike. This is further enhanced by the availability of automatic updates notifying you of changes to law, recent case updates and similar.  Keeping up to date has never been easier and, frankly, I wonder how we ever managed without - perhaps we were blissful in our ignorance?!?
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However there is another development which is in my experience is less than helpful - the emergence of the on-line precedent. On the surface what could possibly be wrong with on-line precedents? Apart from anything else, I hear you say, they result in much more standardisation; who needs 10 different forms for the same transaction. Surely this is a good thing and will help save time and reduce costs?  I even suggested something similar myself in respect of standardising leases, did I not?
Well having recently run a transaction involving a significant number of properties across a portfolio with multiple other small firms involved I can say that this is not the case. Part of the transaction involved obtaining licences from landlords and due to the nature of the properties most often the landlords were represented by small firms. What we noticed was that the same clauses were appearing on almost all the licences we were receiving and the same problem clauses at that.

Why were these clauses a problem?  Let me outline the two most major issues the "standard" precedents caused:

  1. In some cases the clauses were not commercially acceptable. Whilst in the context of a simple transaction involving two individuals or a company owned by its directors they were probably okay, on anything more complicated they became onerous and unworkable. The clauses were not something we as a firm or the other large firms involved have in our standard institutionally accepted forms of documentation. However by including it in their on-line resource the resource provider has created the impression that it is standard in the market. I lost count of the number of times we were greeted with a, "This is a standard requirement of our client and is standard in the market" response. If your client's precedent is an on-line resource I suspect your client is pretty oblivious to most of its terms and just because it is in a precedent does not make it market standard!
  2. The guidance provided by the on-line resource can be unhelpful and, at worst, obstructive. Suggesting a clause is necessary because without it your client's insurance is at risk when in reality the clause is asking a tenant to take on a risk it cannot mitigate with no obligation on the landlord to assist when it could easily do so is hardly a recipe for productive negotiation. Whilst some firms adopt an aggressive first draft and look then to compromise that only works when the draftsman understands what is necessary and what is unnecessary. We spend a significant amount of time going through our precedents with new joiners explaining the purpose of each and every clause.  The purpose of this training is to ensure that they understand why the clause is there and, by extension, if and how it can be amended or, in certain circumstances deleted.  On-line precedents do not come with this level of training.  Therefore, when an amendment is sought, fear sets in because the lawyer does not have the confidence that they fully understand why a clause has been put into a document.  Whilst the argument we put forward may sound convincing what if we are ignoring another reason for the clause's existence?  Conceding the point might result in their client being exposed and the lawyer being negligent.  Therefore, better to resist and rely on the "it is a standard clause" defence.

There is no point complaining unless you propose a solution.  The first solution would be to get rid of on-line precedents but I accept this would be a step backwards and not particularly helpful to the legal fraternity.  If I am honest I think the issue really lies with the draftsmen of these precedents.  In some cases it is my suspicion that the draftsmen are not transactional lawyers but rather professional KDLs.  Whilst this works within a transactional firm this is because the KDLs have the benefit of engaging daily with the transactional lawyers.  This creates a necessary and mutually beneficial exchange of thoughts and ideas.  Draft clauses which show themselves to be commercially unviable fall on the lawyers' equivalent of the cutting room floor.
However, some of the on-line precedent providers loudly and proudly claim that there precedents have been drafted for them by lawyers and law firms so lack of transactional experience cannot along explain the issue.  The problem with this source of precedent is that, whereas within the law firm there exists a peer group within which a proposed amendment can be discussed, evaluated and agreed/amended/rejected with the benefit of the collective hive mind, for the smaller practitioner such support simply does not exist.  Therefore firms providing these drafts must ensure that their drafts are commercially and legally unbiased.  If the starting point is a reasonable one then the fact that a lawyer is less willing/confident to concede a point is not likely to be such an impediment.

Don't get me wrong.  This blog is not intended to be a criticism of my peers who work in smaller firms.  Frankly I think that they do an incredible job.  It is easy to forget how much I rely on the support I have from KDLs, peers and, indeed, as much on-line resource as I could possibly ask for.  Lawyers in smaller firms simply do not have that level of support and yet provide as excellent advice and client service as many a large firm.

No, my criticism is of the providers of supposed tools aimed at reducing the burden of the small firm lawyer.  As I have mentioned previously the role of the transactional lawyer (and by extension his drafting as his tool) is not to seek to screw the opposition.  Those who provide resources to enable the lawyer to do this need to ensure that those resources truly assist the lawyer in furthering his goals and do not, instead, become an unnecessary and unwelcome hurdle to be overcome.

Friday, 12 August 2011

Drafting advice . . . from Princess Leia

I enjoy a bit of sci-fi every now and again and sometimes think that much can be learned from the sage advice of Yoda and friends ... well not really but it can be fun imaging how Yoda would dispense legal advice:

"Enter into that contract will you hmm? Difficult to see the future is. Trust him I do not!"
However, when recently remembering some of Princess Leia's appearances (stop thinking bikini in Return of the Jedi guys) I remembered this line from Episode IV: The New Hope responding to Governer Tarkin's claim that the Death Star meant no planet would dare oppose the Emporer:

"The more you tighten your grip, Tarkin, the more star systems will slip through your fingers"
What on earth is the relevance of this to drafting I hear you ask (not in space of course since sound cannot travel in that vacuum)?

There are some lawyers and, indeed, some clients who believe that in order to make every contract watertight (I am yet to see any contract which achieves this aim) it must cater for every possible event. They will spend painstaking hours trying to conceive every possible (and impossible) "what if" and then seek to draft a provision to deal with it.

However, too much specificity (might be an abuse of a statistical defintion this) has negative consequences. It is next to impossible to draft for every eventuality. The more specific your drafting ("the more you tighten your grip") the greater the risk that events not specifically mentioned will not get caught ("the more star systems will slip through your fingers").

So not only will you have spent a lot of time and cost on legislating for events that will probably never happen, you have quite possibly reduced the chances of dealing properly with the unpredictable one that does.

Identify the real commercial and legal risks (not the distant "what ifs") and draft specifically for those. The rest cover with more general drafting; it's cheaper, more efficient and better for your client in the long run.

Beware the dark side of the law and may the force be with you.

Friday, 25 March 2011

Suits you, sir: The art of bespoke drafting

Almost a month ago I wrote a blog entitled "Transactional Law: a bit like being a London cabbie".  Recently I have been involved in a transaction where I felt like a cabbie with a passenger constantly changing its mind as to where he wanted to get to.  This was an unusal transaction requiring some pretty bespoke drafting which in turn got me thinking about how one should approach drafting for bespoke transactions.  Here's what I came up with:
1.  Be clear on your purpose
Drafting anything, even if it is just one clause in an agreement, is no different to preparing a piece of coursework.  If you simply start drafting you will land up in a mess.  You need to set out what the clause is intended to achieve and also consider any interrelationships with other clauses.
2.  Use decision trees
When trying to draft a more complicated arrangement that requires notices, approvals and inter-connected decisions it is often beneficial to create a decision tree which maps out the process clearly.  This serves two purposes.  First, you can show this to your client before drafting anything to ensure that you and they are on the same page.  Secondly, your drafting will be a lot simpler.
3.  Keep it simple
By this I do not necessarily mean keep it short.  Sometimes draftsmen try to be to clever and express in one sentence too much.  Rather do it in steps.  Think like a mathematician in a logical manner.  Each sentence of drafting should contain only one concept, obligation, effect, etc.
4.  Do not draft for every possible outcome
This is the road to madness and also more likely to result in something being missed.  Lawyers are not omnipotent (despite what some might claim) and cannot predict the future.  Sometimes more general language is safer than being specific as the use of the specific can lead to the exclusion of the general.
5.  The importance of the "cold towel".
Probably the most important aspect is when you have finished the document put it away for 24 hours.  Then re-read it but with the following thought in mind - if I know nothing about this deal can I understand the agreement, the obligations on the parties, the processes involved, etc.  This is not about trying to spot another area for further expansion or loophole to be closed nor about spotting errors (although this is pretty important too)!  Rather it is about whether or not the document is an accurate map of the journey the parties intend on taking.  Remember, the parties will only look at the map when they are lost and cannot agree what direction to go.  If the map is unclear what use is it.

No doubt some will argue with my views whilst others will suggest I have missed something else fundamental.  Their comments and views are more than welcome.